ENGLAND!! :D
nice open shotlike the black and white piano shotconfused about the "opening times" shot--what was it for?you need some transition shots or captions to indicate where we arearound shot #25 you lose me--I didn't know where you were, and the shots didn't have a logical sequence or order to them#39 and #40 are really great shots!There doesn't seem to be a middle or end. It starts good with Harlaxton, but the shots seem haphazardly ordered, and there is no clear ending.
nice open shot
ReplyDeletelike the black and white piano shot
confused about the "opening times" shot--what was it for?
you need some transition shots or captions to indicate where we are
around shot #25 you lose me--I didn't know where you were, and the shots didn't have a logical sequence or order to them
#39 and #40 are really great shots!
There doesn't seem to be a middle or end. It starts good with Harlaxton, but the shots seem haphazardly ordered, and there is no clear ending.